Your basic reveals and transitions are nice and I'd only suggest a couple of tweaks to those, but, throughout you should definitely sync much closer to the vocal delivery, it will underscore what she says, when she says it and give the piece more power.
For example "Simple" should fade in right when she says it, now it comes in a tad early. Follow her pause on "It really is... a revolution". Here, you should also try swapping the reveal of the gradient "revolution", starting at the bottom dark, and end at the top white, that will really increase the power of the reveal.
Same thing on "visible", you reveal it before she says it, that should be right on queue.
The reveal on the HUMAN BEINGS boxes doesn't really support the visual idea. Can they all slide in vertically and horizontally from different directions instead of zooming in? It's the zoom that feels wrong.
Your basic reveals and transitions are nice and I'd only suggest a couple of tweaks to those, but, throughout you should definitely sync much closer to the vocal delivery, it will underscore what she says, when she says it and give the piece more power.
ReplyDeleteFor example "Simple" should fade in right when she says it, now it comes in a tad early. Follow her pause on "It really is... a revolution". Here, you should also try swapping the reveal of the gradient "revolution", starting at the bottom dark, and end at the top white, that will really increase the power of the reveal.
Same thing on "visible", you reveal it before she says it, that should be right on queue.
The reveal on the HUMAN BEINGS boxes doesn't really support the visual idea. Can they all slide in vertically and horizontally from different directions instead of zooming in? It's the zoom that feels wrong.